My general idea centers around the FIRE article that came out this past week. That upset me so I decided to write my paper around that topic. 1)It's about the media and brainwashing through education. How personal politics of the teachers get in the way of the educational ideologies race, class, and gender.
And if you like the above sentences as a thesis, please comment about that too.
2)Personal politics disrupt education ideologies such as race,, class, and gender and effectively condition growing children and teenagers.
3)The inculcated views of young adults today touted as educational ideologies were instilled there by human instructors moved by their own personal politics.
1 comment:
I don't know what article you are referring to but I very much like your topic.
1. I do think your topic could be well suited as a thesis by simply changing How to "The." I think you'd need a comma after ideologies as well.
2. I like the words "Personal politics." However the way this thesis is worded, it sounds like you are defining race, class, and gender as ideologies.
3. I like this thesis. I think you need a comma before and after "touted" and "ideologies." The word "there" may be unnecessary.
I like your topic a great deal. I've done some reading into it myself. You may want to look into "Lies My Teacher Told Me" by James Loewen. Specifically, the book uses the example of how history is taught. It may work well with your topic.
"Schools... perpetuate ignorance and blind trust by reinforcing positive myths about America instead of trusting students with truth"- unknown source from an unknown book
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